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[Prothom Porbo]
onek onek din age ek dashe chilo ek raja. rajar hati shalay hati, ghora shalay ghora, r murgir khamare murgi. rajar sushashone rajjer kothao kono golojog nai, dukho nai, projara shukhi, poshu-pakhira o hashi-khushi, amonki chil r murgir bacchara porjonto ek sathe nritto kore purnima chander onabil josnay.
kintu shanti nai rajar mone. karon holo rajar saat rani-chompa, chameli, beli, jui, togor, joba, r hasnahena. raja saat ranikai valobashen (choto rani hasnahena k ektu beshi) kintu raja kisutai bujhte paren na ranira ashole ki chay, kise tara khusi hoi, kokhon tara rag kore, keno hotat kore tader chokhe kannar dhol name.
sesh porjonto emon holo j raja r rajkarje mon boshate paren na. shudhu vaben r vaben. ki vabe uni bujhte parben ter saat rani ashole ki chai. tobaito uni tader mukhe hashi futate parben.
jai hok, ekdin rajer kane elo tar rajje Ahmed name 22 bosorer ek jubok ase, j oi boyosai sober kase suporichito ter oshadharon buddhimotta, progga r medhar karone. sobai Ahmed k valobashe r Ahmed o sobakie sahajjo kore, sober sukhe dukhe Ahmed achai.
Raja vablen Ahmed kai jigges kora jai ki vabe uni ranider mon porte parben, jante parben ranira asholai ki chai. Jai vaba, sai kaj. raja ahmed k dake pathalen rajdorbare.
Rajar hukum shune tilmatro deri na kore Ahmed chute elo rajdorbare. rajar samne sosommane kurnish kore ahmed bollo, “he poncho somudro r shopto dipa prithibir sob cheye mohanuvob r sob cheye porachromshali raja, ami apner khedmote hajir. onugroho kore bolun, keno amake dekechen, apner nirdesh palon korer jonne ami amar jibon bishorjon dite prostut”.
Ahmed er kotha shune raja ottanoto prito holen. Bollen, “Ahmed, amar mone shanti nai. ami khub e monokoste ase. amar saat rani, kintu ami kisutai tader mon bujhte parina, ami janina Ahmed, tara ashole ki chay. kise tara khushi hoi, kise tader pran kande, amer kase e ek ononto rohosso-ek oporishim jontrona-moddho rater dushopner chayeo boro dushopno. Amer mone hoi ami jodi jante partam je mayeder charitric boishisto (characteristics) ki ar tara ashole ki chai, tahole ami tader mon bujhte sokkhom hotam. tomer proti amer nirdesh, tumi amake ei duti prosner uttor ane debe ek bosor somoyer moddhe. jodi paro, tomake ami ek sohosro shorno mudra upodhoukon debo. r jodi bartho how, tahole tomer gordan jabe.”
rajer adesh shune montri, kotal, patro mitro, sovashod, sober mukh shukiye gelo. romonir mon jana-eto purusher osaddho kaj. emonki shorger debotara porjonto ei kaje bartho. r Ahmed-se to 22 bosorer ek obibahito jubok! Ahmed er nischito barthota r ter porinotir kotha chinta kore oneker chokhe pani ase gelo. rajshovay name elo ek pin-poton nisthobdota.
Kintu Ahmed 22 bosorer togboge rokter okutovoy torun; barthota kake bole se jane na. se driroter sathe bollo, “he sashagora prithibir sob cheye mohan o khomotaban raja, apner nirdesh amer shirodharjo. ek bosorer moddhe ami ei prosner uttor khuje ber korboiiiiii. kintu amer ekti onurodh ase”. raja bollen, “bolo Ahmed, ki tomer onurodh”. Ahmed bollo, “apni doya kore amake ekti Time machine din jate kore ami ei somoyer, age r pore, bivinno somoy porimondole vromon kore manob jatir sob chey gyani r budhiman baktider sathe kothe bole ei proser sothik uttor khuje ber korte pari”. uttore raja bollen, “tothasto”.
Rajer adeshe rajjer prodhan prokousholi ekti time machine niye alen r Ahmed k ter kolkobja soho ki bave seti chalate hoy ta shikhiye dilen. tarpor, Ahmed sobaike biday janiye Time machine e boshe ekta switch tiptai, mone holo jeno ek prochondo ghurnijhor uthlo r muhurter moddhe raj prashad soho sob kisu choker samne theke odrisso hoye gelo.
Ahmed dekhlo, tar samne ek simahin ononto akash- cheye ase rashi rashi tara, nokkhotro, chayapoth r niharikay. kothao kono shobdo nai-shudu Time machine er ektana mridu gunjon chara. nirob nischup ei mohasunne ek ekaki somoy pothik Ahmed agiye chollo ojaner pothe.
(osomapto).
(doya kore kau gali dite chaile dite paren. karon eita oto valo hoi nai. prothom prochesta to)
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Re:Mayera Ashole Ki Chay (ekti adhunik roopkotha) - 2006/06/29 02:00 |
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 Chomotker! Gali keno !!??? Onek Onek taliiiiiiiiiii( Shobdhohin)!!hmmm R govir vabe chinta korte shuru korlam keno 'shudhu meye'der ei opobadh ta dewa holo? 'manush' ki asholei jane se ki chai? jodi janto---pawa hoye gele boltona: "jaha pai taha chai na; Jaha chai taha pai na "Ashole chawa pawar golok dhadhai shudhu meyerai noi;chelerao klantopothik !Baki kotha poroborti 'porbor'r jonno tola roilo.Shuvo kamona Chil .
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Re:Mayera Ashole Ki Chay (ekti adhunik roopkotha) - 2006/06/29 18:16 |
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[Ditiyo Porbo: Trinity House er Ghotona]
Ahmed YEAR METER e takiye dekhlo unbingsho shotabdi. nah, thama jak, vablo se. Ekta switch tiptai Time machine er goti monthor hoye elo r YEAR METER obosheshe thomke daralo 1840 AD te.
Time mechine ti ekti jhoper arale lukiye rakhe Ahmed ghurte ber holo. Raster signboard dekhe bujhlo jaygata London, England. kisukkhon edik-odik ghora-ferar por ekti boro rastar mor ghurtai Ahmed dekhlo bishal ek bari jar baire likha royeche “Trinity House”.
“hmmm, thik jaygai asechi bole mone hoche”, vablo Ahmed. Bishal baritar vitor dhuktai Ahmed dekhlo ekti boro hallroom r sai hallroomer vitore ekjon sadha sidhe cheharar vodrolok kisu jontropati niye kaj korsen. Ahmed k dekhe vodrolok hasi mukhe agiye alen, hat bariye diye bollen, “ami Michael Faraday, ei Trinity House er Scientific Advisor. ki sahajjo korte pari bolun?”
Ahmed jeno hate chand pelo. Faraday r moto scientist nischoye ter prosner uttor dite parben. Ahmed sobinoye ter aser uddassho janiye bollo, “jonab, amer souvaggo je apner dekha pelam. asha korse apni amer somosser ekti somadhan dite parben”.
uttore Faraday haslen r bollen, “obossoi, obossoi, kono chinta korben na”. “to be ter age apni ektu amake sahajjo korun. ei je duti tar (cable) dekhsen, ei tar dutir ek matha oi pakha (fan) ter sathe connect korun ar onno matha duti oi deyal (wall)-e je duti futo (hole) dekhsen sekhane lagan please. Ahmed tai korlo r obak bissoye takiye dekhlo pakhata apna thekai ghurte shuru korese; chomotker ekta shorir jurano thanda hawa choriye porse char pashe. Ahmed er mone holo se bujhi jadu dekhse, karon er age se kono pakha ke apna theke ghurte dekheni.
ektu por Faraday Ahmed k bollen pakhater sathe lagano tar (cable) duti khule hat diye sporsho korte. khola tar duti hat diye sporsho kora matro Ahmed er sara shorir ekti prochondo jhakuni khelo r k jeno take dhakka mere fele dilo majhete.
obissasso dristite Ahmed cheye roilo sai tar dutir dike. se kisutai bujhte parselona k take dhakka diyese karon se abong Faraday chara room e r kau nai. ei dhoroner oviggota ter jibone ei prothom.
ei somoy pash theke Faraday bole uthlen, “eti holo apner prothom prosner uttor”. Ahmed er mathay kisui dhuksilo na. se shudhu kono mote bolte parlo, “k amake dhakka dilo? kothay amar prosner uttor? ami to kisui bujhte parse na jonab”.
Faraday tokhon bollen, “Ahmed, ei matro je jinisti apnake dhakka mare felo dilo niche, ter nam electricity. Mayeder charitric boishisto (characteristics) holo ei electricity er moto. apni jodi janen, kivabe tader jotno nite hoi, ki vabe tader sathe baboher korte hoy, tahole oi fan theke asa thanda hawer motoi kisu paben ja apner mon voriye dabe shantir abeshe. kintu jodi vul koren, tahole oi electric shock er motoi kisu paben ja apni jibone kokhonoi chan ni”.
uttore Ahmed shudhu kono mote matha narate parlo. ter matha ghurse. shorir kapse.
Faraday tokhon bollen, “Ahmed, aber tobe asha jak apner ditiyo somosser somadhane. cholun amra roomer oi prante je jontropati gulu ase, sekhane jai”. “o re baba”, Ahmed vablo, “meyeder charitric boishisto ki, tara kemon, seta jante giye ami electric shock kheye dhorashaye, shorirer kapuni ekhono jai ni, chokhe sorsheful dekhse, ar meyera ki chay seta jante gale hoito amer jibon tai jabe. ter cheye ei Triniti House chere joto taratari palano jay, totoi mongol”. ei vabe, ek muhurto deri na kore Ahmed Trinity House er janala diye baire laphiye porlo. shunte pelo peson theke Faraday bolsen, “ektu to batha lagbai, o kisu na, fir e asun please”. kintu Faraday er ashash bani Ahmed k tolate parlo na. se konomote doure giye time machine e chore boslo abong nimishei London r unbingsho shotabdi, dutoi ekjoge poritag kore vase porlo ononto mohasunne.
mone mone bollo, “issor ke donnobad. darun bacha beche gase aj”.
[osomapto]
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Re:Mayera Ashole Ki Chay (ekti adhunik roopkotha) - 2006/07/01 00:27 |
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hmmmm--Michael Faraday'r moto(beshi baria bola hoye gelo kintu!lol ) chil ter Buddhidhipto lekhoni diye amader jakuni dicchen (with out electricity !) R ami Ahmed 'er moto (Obosho buddhihin ) chokhe sorsheful na; bhalo lekhoker shomvabona dekhte pacchi(jodio amar dekhai kichu jai ashena!)Chil apner na likhe upai nei  Amader bhalo likha thake bonchito korben na asha korchi.Shuvo kamon .
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Re:Mayera Ashole Ki Chay (ekti adhunik roopkotha) - 2006/07/01 21:48 |
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[Tritiyo Porbo: Galileo-r Bou Paliye Gelo Keno]
Ahmed eber chollo somoy er pachon pane. YEAR METER er kata jokhon 1630 AD te, Ahmed Time machine thamiye name porlo.
jaygata ekti chotto lokaloy. chara chara barighor. gram gram chehara. “hmm, e kothay elam ami”, vablo Ahmed. ter oprichito chehara r jama kapor dekhe lokjon ter dike onno vabe takache kintu kau kisu bolse na. Ahmed ekjon k jiggesh kore jante parlo jaygater nam Pisa, Italy.
olpo somoyer moddhai jaygata Ahmed er valo lage gelo. bacchara khelse, ghuri orasse, borora barir samne bose adda disse, shanto nirmol poribesh. ghure ghure dekhte laglo Ahmed.
hotath duti choto baccha doure elo ter dike, bollo, “ei, tumi gache uthte paro? amader ghuri atke gase oi gachta te. please ektu namiye daw na”. Ahmed bollo, “kon gache? amake dekhiye dao, ami ekkhuni namiye dichchi”.
Baccha duti Ahmed er hath dhore tante tante niye chollo ekti besh lomba gacher dike. Ahmed dekhlo lal-nil ghuri ti atke ache gachter ekebare mogdale. “osubidha nai”, bacchader bollo se. tarpor gach baye otha shuru korlo. besh jakra gach r dalpala o beshi. ahmed er ektu somoy laglo ghuri-r kase pouchate.
ghurita hathe niye niche takatai Ahmed to obak. ekta besh boro bhir jomese niche. virer kendrobindu holo ek shada dariwala buro lok, ter hate ekta lomba nol er moto jinish r se jinista diye pala kore baki lokjon Ahmed-kai dekhse. “odvut bepar to, ki hote pare oi loba nol er moto jinista”, vablo Ahmed. jai hok se name elo gach theke.
bacchara sobai doure elo ter kase, ter hate chumu kheye dhonnobad janalo, tarpor ghuri niye doure chole gelo mathe.
Ahmed agiye gelo virer dike. shunte pelo joro howa lokder keu ekjon bolse, “ha Galileo, tomer durbin jontrota asholai kajer. ami to gacher upore lokter chehara posto dekhte pachcilam”. arek jon bollo, “hmmm, etodine ekta notun jinish dekhlam ja durer jinish k kache dekhay”. “acha Galileo, tumi ki emon kono jontro banate paro, ja diye durer manush k kache tane ana jabe?” ter prosno shune sobai ho ho kore hashe uthlo. Kintu Ahmed er mathay chomok khele gelo-“Galileo- ekjon abishkarok, ter mathay nischoy onek buddhi. ami takai jigges kori na keno, mayera ashole ki chay?”
Ahmed dhir paye Galileo-r kase agiye gelo. kushol binimoyer por sontorpone ter Pisa agomoner uddasho janalo se. jante chilo Galileo e bepare take kisu bolte paren kina.
Galileo take sai gachter dike tane niye galen. gacher niche ekti boro pathorer upor boshe Ahmed k ishara korlen ter pashe boste. Tarpor lomba jobber pocket theke duti gole moto kancher tukro (lens) ber kore segolu ekta choto ret (file) diye ghoste ghoste Galileo bollen, “shono baba, tumi j somossaer kotha bolso, seti niye ami onekdin dhore matha ghamiyesi abong ekti sunirdisto somadhane pouchesi, jodio gobeshonar sheshta temon sukher hoini”.
bolte bolte Galileo ektu udash hoye galen-“shono baba, amer bibachonay mayera holo torol podarther moto r tader chawa-pawa bojher sob cheye upojogi poddhoti holo VECTOR FIELD ANALYSIS”. VECTOR FIELD jinista ki seta konomotai bodhogommo holo na Ahmed er kintu Galileo k kother majhe badha dawa thik hobe na mone kore se chup chap shunte laglo.
kanch ghoste ghoste Galileo bole chollen, “ami hiseb koshe ber koresi j mayeder mon ek dhorener oti khudro bostukona, jake ami nam diyechi GIRL CHARGE, songkhepe G, ter somonnoye gothito. ei GIRL CHARGE, VECTOR FIELD er goti-prokriti mane chole r er poriman e ashole nirdharon kore mayera ki chay.
G er poriman jodi jothajoth hoi (appropriate), tahole mayera chay ekti shundor prithibi jekhane tara nijerai nijader vaggo niyontron korte parbe purusher somo-morjaday. kintu G er poriman jodi beshi hoi, tahole mayera chay prithibir sob kisu, oi jale r sonali mach golper jale bou er moto. r G er poriman kom hole tara khub osthir motir hoy, chorui pakhir moto chawa-pawa brikkher shakahy shakhay osthir vabe bichoron korte thake”.
Galileo-r osadharon bisleshon e Ahmed ovivuto hoye gelo. ekai bole prothiva. vablo se.
Ektu dom niye Galileo punoray bola shuru korlen, “kintu baba, amer ei totto (theory) ami proman korte parini sharirik humkir karone. ki hoyesilo tomake boli. totto (theory) ti proman korer jonno ami amer istri-r (wife) GIRL CHARGE koto ta porimap korte gaselam. kintu bisoy ti ter kase uposthapon kora matro oggato karone se amer upor khipto hoye uthlo, ghorer sob kancher bason-koshon-hari-
patil bhenge ekakar korlo, tarpor jhata-r hatol diye pulisher LATHI CHARGE er moto amer poschtat-deshe aghat korte korte bollo, amer naki GIRL CHARGE er bodole JHATA CHARGE ki jinish, setai valo kore age jana uchit.
erpor, pordin vore hower agai se amer bari chare ter tolpi-tolpa niye udhao hoye gelo. dosh bosor kate gase, ami r take dekhini.
terpor theke ami thik koresi ami r kono dhoroner Charge niye chinta korbo na. ter chaye ei dur k nikot korer jontro niye kaj kora sharirk vabe onek nirapod.
bolte bolte Galileo-r gola vari hoye elo. briddho manush ti pocket thake rumal ber kore ter chokh muchte laglen. briddher dukkhe Ahmed er mon vije gelo. santona dewar jonno se bollo, “jonab, dukkho kore kono luv nai, ja ghoter ta ghotbai, amra chai ba na chai’.
Totokkhone shondha name eseche char pashe. Galileo uthlen r Ahmed k ter barite ratrijaponer amontron janalen. Ahmed dhonnobad janiye Galileo-r sathe ter barir dike rawana holo.
rate ghumanor age Ahmed er mone holo, raja hoito ei GIRL CHARGE bisoyti posondo korte paren. kintu jehetu ek bosorer kisu somoy ekhono baki ase, somoyta kaje lagiye aro kisu gyani-gunijoner motamot neyata valo hobe. ei vabte vabte Ahmed Ghumiye porlo.
kintu ghum nai Galileo-r chokhe. prodiper mridu aloy briddho ekmone golaker kanch ghose cholesen ratri diprohor e. ter mone hocche, “somoy r beshi baki nai ter. kintu korer moto onek kaj e j ekhono baki roye gase. jibonta eto choto hoi keno. keno jibon eto choto”?
[osomapto]
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